First thing I noticed is that the black is a little hard to read on the cyan. I would suggest using a ghosted box or screening the cyan back a bit if you want to keep the black text. Otherwise, play with a tint of 100% yellow, or one of the other colors in the palette.
Make sure to turn the hyphenation off in the paragraphs--it makes it a lot easier to read ragged right with it isn't hyphenated.
"Beginning" is misspelled in the second paragraph, and then just to be nit-picky, you use a lot of adjectives.
So I agree with Bethany and saw a typo or two, but nothing that some keen editing won't fix. Also, when inquiring about the contributors, I have some advice: from the assignment sheet. "List the following titles with names of the contributors: editor in chief, creative director, designers, photographers, writers and illustrators."
So, I guess that could either be us, or just invent made up names... whatever you decide.
Wait, actually, I realized I've been putting my name in the by-lines, so just put our names.
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First thing I noticed is that the black is a little hard to read on the cyan. I would suggest using a ghosted box or screening the cyan back a bit if you want to keep the black text. Otherwise, play with a tint of 100% yellow, or one of the other colors in the palette.
Make sure to turn the hyphenation off in the paragraphs--it makes it a lot easier to read ragged right with it isn't hyphenated.
"Beginning" is misspelled in the second paragraph, and then just to be nit-picky, you use a lot of adjectives.
That's all I saw. Yeah.
So I agree with Bethany and saw a typo or two, but nothing that some keen editing won't fix. Also, when inquiring about the contributors, I have some advice: from the assignment sheet. "List the following titles with names of the contributors: editor in chief, creative director, designers, photographers, writers and illustrators."
So, I guess that could either be us, or just invent made up names... whatever you decide.
Wait, actually, I realized I've been putting my name in the by-lines, so just put our names.
Other than that, I think it looks great!
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