Text-Flow 2

Minus 1 double truck spread and 1 ad:

Ad for Wii:

Updated Toy Ad

I made some small changes, so I thought I would post for critique. Let me know if you notice anything.

Obscure Games

Hey, ladies. I would welcome any feedback you have for my sad spread. I've given up on it, to tell you the truth. But here it is so far.

PS:

Hey all. Just placing things into the working text-flow, and it looks like right now, we're 10 pages down, and have 12 more to do, with the cover.

Send me files as you get them done please.

Letter From Editor Comp

Please, someone proof this for me?
(I need to talk to ya'll about contributors, and how we want them profiled.)

review spread